Some people only want to do things that they can do well whereas other want to explore new things that they are not used to even when it mens taking chances. What is your preference when working?
Each person has different work methods in their fields, some people prefer to do things that they can do well while others would like to detect new chances whenever they have. In my opinion, I have a preference in that I would like to discover strange things when working.
Initially, exploring new things makes me gain many knowledge and abundant experience. when I have a chance that I have not done ever, I will take this opportunity as soon as because each chance helps me discover my competence and knowledge in different fields. I am enhanced multiple skills and experiences through these opportunities. The experiences that I have accumulated can improve more and more. besides, I can absorb new skills that I do not know before. Each chance that I assist me to fulfill my qualifications and ability. Therefore, I can willing to devote and dare myself in many fields, I will know my strengths and also weaknesses to select an appropriate job position for me.
Furthermore, companies these days always require their employees to have a large number of skills and can work in many different positions. so, we should develop and expand our competence as we can. We will become a person who they would like to look up for their firm because we have essential skills and even soft skills to assume assignments. We are all-around and accomplished people since we comprehend variable fields and have multiple experiences. Obviously, if we learn many new things, we can absorb a large amount of knowledge and how to apply them when working.
In conclusion, for the mentioned reasons, I prefer to detect new things whenever I have a chance because of bringing several benefits for my work. Also, I believe that learning many things is a great choice for us to discover ourselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...lly, exploring new things makes me gain many knowledge and abundant experience. when...
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Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun knowledge seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much knowledge', 'a good deal of knowledge'.
Suggestion: much knowledge; a good deal of knowledge
...lly, exploring new things makes me gain many knowledge and abundant experience. when I have a ...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...many knowledge and abundant experience. when I have a chance that I have not done ev...
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Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
... accumulated can improve more and more. besides, I can absorb new skills that I do not ...
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Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... always require their employees to have a large number of skills and can work in many different p...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... large number of skills and can work in many different positions. so, we should develop and ex...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...d can work in many different positions. so, we should develop and expand our compe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, even so, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87828947368 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80102305892 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513157894737 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8551576807 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6875 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25017557394 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841640662822 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920976704947 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179186397501 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120723446425 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.