Online shopping is becoming more and more popular in the COVID-19 pandemic.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend and give your own opinion
In the COVID-19 pandemic, there has been a growing trend in online shopping. this
presents both pros and cons, however, I personally feel that its benefits far outweigh the
drawbacks.
On the one hand, this trend has two major disadvantages. Initially, since people can not
actually see the products they want, they tend to purchase them with poor quality. this
leads to dissatisfaction, and, in turn, people will abandon the product that they have bought.
Furthermore, there is a lack of security in online shopping. Credit card scams, identity theft,
counterfeit items, and other frauds are all widespread when shopping online.
On the other hand, I believe that shopping online brings consumers a multitude of
advantages. Firstly, there is no doubt that buying things online helps people save a great
deal of time. customers can purchase from the comfort of their home or workplace, saving
time on transportation. customers may also hunt for the things they need by utilizing search
engines. Moreover, there are a variety of choices when shopping online. Instead of being
restricted, people may shop from stores in other regions of their country or even the world.
Finally, it is considerably easier to compare and evaluate items and their costs online. when
searching for appliances, for example, customers may find user evaluations and product
comparisons for each alternative on the market, as well as links to the best pricing.
In conclusion, while this trend can be beneficial, it also has some drawbacks. Besides,
people should be careful when shopping online to avoid online frauds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33073929961 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7726131373 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618677042802 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8840902909 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.5882352941 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0588235294 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133117716041 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482906865295 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496430921141 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0443808110242 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574746919336 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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