The following opinion was provided in a letter to the editor of a national aeronautics magazine :
"Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men and women into space. Therefore, we should invest our resources in unmanned space flight."
In the letter presented to the editor of a national aeronautics magazine , it is suggested that manned space fligts are not cost effective when compared to that of an unmanned space probe . This opinion arises as it has been demonstrated that a huge deal of information can be gathered without the cost and risks associated with sending humans into space . However , before this suggestion can be evaluated , it should answer to the following two questions
First of all , the suggestion which opines that unmanned space probe is preferred than with a manned one. But does it consider the fact that they are not the same ? do they take in account of the efficiency of a manned space probe ? It is possible that the manned and unmanned space flights are not similar at all .The manned space flight which is accompanied by men and women , has a remarkable edge than the unmanned probes in terms of space protocols and security . This can be attributed to the fact that even though the unmanned probe is automated one , it does so remain only for a limited span of life . On the other hand , the one which is supervised by humans , tend to be far more guided and even can give informations in a real time basis . This real time information sharing , sometimes can occur erroneously with respect to the unmanned space probes.If either of those scenarios has met , then the conclusion drawn in the original statement does not hold true.
Secondly , are the space research organisation and the government ready to bear the cost of unnecessary damages that occur to unmanned space probes ? Perhaps it may be true that manned space probes , which are under the supervision of humans , has a long life span and can be used to its maximum potential till its expiry . Moreover , the cost of repair is stupendous incase of an unmanned space probe when comparing it with the manned probe. This is due to the fact that being an automated machine , it has a tendency of being worn out much early . Further , as far as the unmanned space flight is concerned , it may be atmost , become irrepairable incase of damages which may happen during its mid -space voyage .This probe might then , well be labelled as unproductive and frequent cost of such incidents might sky-rocket the human investment on such resources .If the above statements are true , then the conclusion drawn in the original statement is significantly weakened
In conclusion , the argument , as it stands now , is considerably flawed due to its reliance on unwarranted assumptions . If the author is able to answer the above mentioned couple of qestions and offer more evidence , then it will be possible to fully evaluate the viability of proposed recommendation to prefer unmanned space probes
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 12 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 464 350
No. of Characters: 2203 1500
No. of Different Words: 213 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.641 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.748 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.644 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 146 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 102 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 86 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.047 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.362 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.546 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.07 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion, first of all, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.6327345309 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 28.8173652695 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 55.5748502994 104% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2260.0 2260.96107784 100% => OK
No of words: 463.0 441.139720559 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88120950324 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72886173042 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 204.123752495 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473002159827 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 705.55239521 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.96107784431 222% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.8473053892 131% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.771473204 57.8364921388 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.666666667 119.503703932 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8666666667 23.324526521 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 5.70786347227 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 48.0 5.25449101796 914% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314531264879 0.218282227539 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12892357213 0.0743258471296 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108952634548 0.0701772020484 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201286374768 0.128457276422 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878230660791 0.0628817314937 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.3799401198 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.3550499002 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.197005988 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 98.500998004 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 12.3882235529 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.1389221557 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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