Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.
Without a shadow of a doubt, Television plays an important role in our lives. Some people believe that movies and television have drawbacks more than advantages on the youngsters behavior. Personally, I believe on the contrary movies have advantages more than disadvantages on young people attitude for two reason.
The first reason worth mentioning that television nowadays could be consider as an educational tool. There are a lot of documentary channels which are introduce effective teaching programs. Therefore, young people might get benefits from such programs by only sitting on front of television and watching. For instance, the first time I heard about Egyptian civilization history was from a documentary that I watched. this documentary reveals my interested in Egyptian culture since then I pay more attention to such as documentaries. This experience taught me that television and movies can expand our knowledge and maximize information that we have.
Another significant reason I want to mention is that television and movie are approximately free entertainment method compared by other methods and all family members could be gathered and share enjoyment with each other. This encourage young people to spend their free time without worry about financial status . therefore exploiting free time by watching movies with their families rather than have noting to do is for sure better. youngster who have a lot of free time tend to make more problem. for example, I read a paper two weeks ago about the relationship between availability of free time and aggressiveness among young people, The paper shows that young people who have a lot of residual time after doing their daily tasks are more aggressive than other. because they do not have useful activities to do during free time. This paper shows me that television and movies are the most effective entertainment method for young people to spend free time with their families.
In conclusion, television and movies have a positive impact on young people behavior. Not only for that television introduce education content but also it is a suitable way to spend free time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25072886297 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85840674428 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524781341108 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.29080374 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.055555556 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308037056514 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108459429856 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760688229487 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202832312775 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430262033738 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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