The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in
New Zealand in 2002.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,
and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrated the proportion of most prevalent sports in New Zealand in 2002.
It is evident that the figure for most sports had differences between boys and girls. However, the proportion for basketball and tennis saw a strong correlation.
Among girls, there were 25% played netball - and a lower percentage - 22% - enjoyed swimming. However, the figure for basketball and tennis seemed familiar - which were 7% and 8%, respectively. While approximately 5% of girls participated in athletics and soccer, there was just less than 5% of them love cricket and martial arts. Finally, participants in other, unspecified sports accounted for 10%.
In contrast, among boys, the proportion for netball was significantly low - which was roughly 2%. However, the boys were big fans of soccer because 25% of them took part in it. Cricket, martial arts, and swimming were also popular among boys with figures of roughly 10% to 14%. Besides that, the percentages for basketball and tennis were about 7% to 8%, followed by 4% for athletics.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the boys were big fans of soccer because 25% of them took part in it. Cricket, ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, however, if, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23214285714 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85689511725 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.3014115891 43.030603864 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.9090909091 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0777856752956 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381629083443 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704544967318 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852008776067 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957760200419 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.