The graph gives information about the age of popoulation of Iceland between 1990 and 2020
Summerizing the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart shows the differences between age groups of Iceland between 1990 and 2020
In the first glance ,we can see the size of 25-54 age group accounts for more than one third of Iceland's population and rocketing to just under 50% of the population in 2020,which means a lot.It is estimated that 25-54 age group will maybe rise up to over half of Iceland's population in the next 10 years.
Meanwhile,the older age group doesn't seem to change much.The size of the 55-64 accounts for about 13% of the population in 1990 and peaked in 2010,approximately 10%,which decrease only 2% of the population.This is also true about the older age group, the size of 64 and over age group not changing so much,it's about 13% in 1990 and slighly increase from years to years and peaked in 2010 at about 14%
However,the difference of the younger age group:15-24 and under 15 age groups seems really obvious.There has been a drop in under 15 age group,from 28% in 1990 to just under 20%.Similarly the age group of 15-24 also decrease from about 21% to just under 10%.It shown that perhaps the young generation population have prospensity to fall.
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- The graph gives information about the age of popoulation of Iceland between 1990 and 2020 Summerizing the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Sorry I dont know how to add the picture TwT 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, really, similarly, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73366834171 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80550563124 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532663316583 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 99.0 22.4926829268 440% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 172.5 43.030603864 401% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 471.0 112.824112599 417% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 99.5 22.9334400587 434% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 33.0 5.23603664747 630% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124251606997 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109218939054 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.016741094814 0.0843802449381 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103221670683 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550585665956 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 50.6 13.2329268293 382% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.63 61.2550243902 -6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.4 10.3012195122 373% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.34 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.06136585366 131% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.4329268293 254% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 41.6 10.9970731707 378% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.