Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Technology has blessed human being over time, and is still blessing. Human have made their life easy with the help of technology by inventing astonishing machines and methods. Computer is one of them, and some people believe that it is the only significant discovery of human history. I agree with the given statement. My inclination will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, among all the discoveries some people consider the computer is the exclusive one. The primary reason for this is that with the help of computer people can solve a problem in a better way. For example, computer can store and process huge amount of data at a time, which is quite impossible task for human brain. Besides, with the help of computer scientists can control the velocity of a missile or a rocket. In addition, nowadays, computer is an inseparable part of our modern life. This is because, we cannot think our office work as well as our research activities without the aid of computer. We cannot perform bioinformatic analysis of our research output without this machine. Hence, it is regarded as the most prominent invention.
Moreover, computer provides us the opportunity of accessing unlimited sources of knowledge. For example, with the help of the internet connected computer we can prepare our class lectures, exam notes and so on. Besides, we can enrich the horizon of our knowledge by learning from wikipedia, youtube, joining online courses and many more through computer. Consequently, computer has enabled us to gain unlimited information in an unrestricted manner.
To sum up it can be said that, the invention of computer is undoubtedly a great step for the human history. It has a significant role in the prosperity of human being around the world.
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Message: Consider replacing "in an unrestricted manner" with adverb for "unrestricted"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, hence, if, moreover, so, still, well, for example, in addition, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02721088435 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82119432093 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56462585034 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8324025091 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.7894736842 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4736842105 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173983044519 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610080862966 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469415796841 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107944835572 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317363455851 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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