Access to the Internet possibly help the youngsters achieve their educational and their work-related goals more easily than in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As we move into the twenty- first century, technology or more particularly Internet has significantly affected us especially Generation Z in many fields and education or working are no exception. Being a high-school student, I firmly believe that Internet contributes a lot to our life and make an easier way to achive what we want.
Perhaps the greatest bonus of the Internet is the flexibility it offers. These days, students are no longer essential to be present in the lecture theatre for their courses. This means that part- time courses for adults who are in employment abd distance learning course for people in other countries are now much more pratical. On par with this, white- collar workers are also not compulsory to have a seat at their company to compelete the jobs, KPI or deadlines. They just demand a computer to do all the things without getting out their home sweet home. This can be a huge merit in this serious situation of COVID-19 pandemic, not only you are safe toward this disease but also getting your work done.
Another extent that Internet brings to is saving time. In the past, it requires us to go to the local library, knows ins and outs to get the most handy information serving our purposes but now we call for Wikipedia, Google or other digital platforms. Furthermore, the ability of making a project or a business transaction can be noticeably widened.
The more opportunities you have, the closer distance you need to go on the road to success. At this time, a numerous amount of projects being done by teenagers is bursting every corners of social media with a view to enhance life skills, teamwork skils that support them to have much more better career paths.
To sum up, with the help from the Internet, young ones, nowsadays, can enhance the succesful possibility of their education or working. It is no doubt that quality of life is also improved as a consequence.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 284, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...rk skils that support them to have much more better career paths. To sum up, with the he...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81515151515 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66739831561 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9666550845 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.933333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186531378891 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580215721297 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467275791199 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960833997893 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351027523354 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 284, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...rk skils that support them to have much more better career paths. To sum up, with the he...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81515151515 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66739831561 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9666550845 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.933333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186531378891 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580215721297 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467275791199 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960833997893 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351027523354 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.