Your sister has been in the hospital for a week. During this time, you have noticed the meals are providing for her are very poor quality. Write an email to the hospital manager and include the following thingsÑ
-Tell him/her what you have seen in the past.
-Complain about the food quality.
-Offer a suggestion on how things could improve.
Dear hospital manager,
I am writing you to express concern I have about the food quality at your hospital. My sister has been in the hospital for a week, and the meals the nurses are feeding her are very unhealthy.
So far, the meals have mainly consisted in carbs and sugar. This has had a negative effect on my sister's health. For lunch today, they gave her mashed potatoes and strawberry jelly. I am concerned about this because there is almost no nutritional value in these foods. How are the patients supposed to get better when they are not being given a healthy diet?
I would like to suggest a change in the meal plans. Perhaps the patients could be given fish or chicken for for supper everyday in order to get some protein.For lunches, they could be given a healthy salad with a dairy product such as yogurt or cheese. I believe a balanced diet like this would help the patients improve much faster.
I hope you accept my advice for the sake of all the patient's health.
Regards,
Peter
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: for
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...be given fish or chicken for for supper everyday in order to get some protein.For lunche...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...r everyday in order to get some protein.For lunches, they could be given a healthy ...
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Line 9, column 53, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'patients'' or 'patient's'?
Suggestion: patients'; patient's
...ccept my advice for the sake of all the patients health. Regards, Peter
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60220994475 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28032943297 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646408839779 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4146672604 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7272727273 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26677954774 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868294716735 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901200711018 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156727790416 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113890264502 0.0580467560999 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.