Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
It is believed that the best teachers are parents to teach attitudes for kids. However, it is partially agreed that school teachers give more contribution to children’s study.
To begin with, instead of parents, it is true that school teachers contribute the development of children in their study. That is to say, when kids are confused of the subjects, teachers can assist them to solve the problem, having a tendency to broaden horizons for students, while father and mother may have limited knowledge in terms of study topics. For instance, if elementary schoolers are in a difficulty related to math, teachers will help to solve the question because their own parents do not possess an ability and knowledge in regard to this science-based subjects, so that the kids will recognize the solution if they meet the type of the question again.
Nevertheless, parents are the most influence persons, being able to address the behavior of children rather than the teachers, because of the closeness. This is because, the tight bonding of family has a power to tell kids about positive attitudes, being perfect for child growth in social life, in comparison to teachers in school only perhaps focus on academic. For example, as a firm belief in Asia, adults talk their son or daughter about how to behave well to friends, while teachers in primary schools merely probably tell them about science theories. Without positive manners, children will be neglected in social environments, absolutely.
In conclusion, it is agreed believed that parents and formal teachers is needed for child development regarded the horizons and behavior, respectively. Where possible, teachers and family should cooperate to treat the children.
- The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age 78
- The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries 61
- The chart shows the sales of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014 73
- The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years 78
- The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in regard to, it is true, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26353790614 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75499756792 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574007220217 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.6397091974 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.545454545 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7272727273 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119732747706 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053047133155 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351393081905 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909913720267 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377569113932 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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