In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this
More and more students who graduated from high school, take a gap year to have a job or get used to the world. By doing this, young people can give themself great benefits, but some drawbacks need to be taken into account.
Taking a break from school can be beneficial, especially for the young. In most cases, high school graduates have no experience with the real world, and working or traveling can help to familiarize them with how things operate at the same time giving them chances and to expand their network. Compared to students who choose not to take a year off, the ones who do are more mentally prepared for their future school life, because they might have found out their passion and are motivated, it is also because knowing how hard life could be will enable them to cope with the stress, difficulties in their next academic journey.
Besides all the benefits, taking a break for one year can be wasteful and make one lose interest in studying. Students might not know what to do next and waste all their precious youth on leisure activities. Those who waste their time will have trouble getting back to an academic environment for instance university. Not only will they lose a year but also stay behind all of their peers. Ultimately leads to a loss of interest in studying.
In conclusion, young people can take a gар year to sharpen their skills and have a better understanding of the world which will help them in their learning journey and also their future. But some might not be suitable considering all the drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71323529412 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41793284056 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547794117647 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.919251294 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.833333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195206276603 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767692371291 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528284849459 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133727046001 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485443011363 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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