The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The two given pie charts illustrate the percentage of online retail sales for travel, film/music, books, and clothes in New Zealand in two different periods.
Generally, it is evident from the charts that the online sales of books and film or music witnessed an increase over a ten-year period from 2003 to 2013, whereas clothing and travel sectors were in the opposite position. It is noticeable that travel and film or music made up the largest proportion of the total sales in two selected years.
In 2003, travel was the major online sale of the year with 36%, which was 12% higher than the clothing sector. However, over the decade, a fall of 7% resulted in the same sector which became the second-largest proportion of online retail sales. Likewise, the second primary sector in 2003 was clothes, which accounted for 24% of overall sales. The figure saw a slight decline of 8% and was in the last position in 2013.
In the film or music category, the online sales figure of the sector rose strikingly by 21% to reach 33% in 2013. A relatively small portion of online shopping sales was for books (19%) in 2003 which was marginally lower than that in 2013 at 16%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, second, whereas, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67961165049 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42242251317 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538834951456 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9757759526 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.111111111 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239561735436 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105032460995 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472774612301 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159373207914 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035016789465 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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