it is thought by many people that the Internet has caused people to become more isolated from society To what extent do you agree or disagree

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it is thought by many people that the Internet has caused people to become more isolated from society. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

It is widely believed that spending time on the Internet could separate people from social life. From my points of view, I strongly disagree with this statement for a number of reason, which will be highlighted in this essay.
The crucial cause for supporting this argument is that using the Internet develops human social skills by communicating with others through appealing online apps. For example,Facebook is used widely in all age groups and it allows users to keep in touch with relatives and friends regardless of geographical distance.The growths of such tools give inhabitanrts more oppoturnities to interact mutual.
Another ground that should be taken into consideration is that the online network plays a vital role in enhancing human knowledge. Keeping up with the lastest news make it easier for individual to express their personal comprehension about a certain aspect of daily communication. One example out of many is that citizents in Vietnam could update the relevant information of Covid-19 pandemic like a number of cases and deaths,vaccine.
From what has been discussed above, in conclusion, I once again reaffirm that the Internet brings many advantages to human life than isolates them from community because of boosting social skills and expanding knowledge as well.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37745098039 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99099555368 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686274509804 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.52454695 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.125 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152164087814 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593305102312 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596108129235 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895296875026 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573113141547 0.056905535591 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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