The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking.
These days, public debate has been going on over whether the use of mobile is as harmful as smoking for society and it should be prohibited in selected locations just like smoking. I tend to believe that using cellphones cannot be banned but some restrictions can be forced on using it according to the time and location.
Three main factors support the idea of banning cell phones. The primary factor we need to take into consideration is that many young people are totally addicted to social media or gaming which is significantly dangerous for youngsters. Obviously, people nowadays are so addicted to the internet that while driving or riding they use their mobile phones. Therefore, we can see many cases of accidents that happened due to mobile. lastly, I would like to mention a recent incident that happened at a construction site near my apartment, A load shifting work was in progress via a Tower Crane and the man whose job was to guide the crane operator was busy in his mobile and due to this mismanagement the load accidentally fell down and few construction workers got seriously injured.
I admit that mobile phones are now an important part of human life and it has made our lives very easy and fast but, at the same time, it can be the most dangerous thing. so, there should be a proper guideline of where and when to use it, not considering it as antisocial but for the safety of ourselves and the people around us.
In conclusion, I would like to say that mobile phone is an extremely useful device but it's up to the people that how they use it in their daily life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Lastly
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Suggestion: So
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, so, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62323943662 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58887597496 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612676056338 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.5672548132 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.3 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304373300637 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101263822459 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709160424165 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178190680742 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703691291532 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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