Do you agree or disagree that animals should be kept in man-made cells?
For a start, most animals are social species, which means they prefer traveling in large hedges to find a meal. However, in an enclosure, they can only walk in circles with one or two others which manifests the chronic stress of being locked up. As a result, a variety of mammals have been suffering from zoochosis. To give more details, a male elephant who was being stuck at the Los Angeles zoo continuously bobbed his head up and down due to being forced to put up with the extreme and unnatural environment. Worst of all, many animals are taken from their families or sent to other zoos, or killed by their predators.
Secondly, incivility and contempt towards animals are considered an alarming affair. These days, many people visit zoos with the core aim of entertainment not enhancing knowledge, which leads to a bunch of inappropriate actions on animals. For example, some zoo-goers have constantly fed unsuitable food to animals such as yogurt, snacks, this means that they may easily get illnesses relating to the digestive system. Moreover, marine species such as dolphins or sea lions are always being used to make fun from embarrassing performances. Consequently, they can easily panic and have a fear of screaming visitors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00483091787 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74071046455 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.700483091787 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5661188678 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.6 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0838136499602 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300754245895 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0208908826593 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654014955385 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131977640817 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.