Some people prefer shopping in shopping centers, while others prefer local markets. What are the advantages of each?
Some individuals have doing shopping in shopping malls. Meanwhile, others prefer to local markets as well as there are manifold reasons behind this instead of which types of benefits I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.
First and foremost, there is no doubt that today yougerster have very hectic schedule about their work as far as they has little time spending for family members because they have extremely active regarding their trades. After that, youth always prefer do shopping for huge centers so who can buy everything nor what they wants in one place and even save the time either they would focus on other works. Moreover, in these days, shopping centers are open everywhere or any city. Therefore, all something have fixed prizes whatever adolescent had purchased like clothes, shoes, furniture, dinner set, toys, and so on. Furthermore, one of best thing in shopping centers all kind of shops are available here . what they customers would they can choose us. Thus, local shops always treat good way for client .
Moving forwards, local shops have good advantages client can force to reduce to cost. Otherwise, sometimes people research many items for other shops. In fact, street shops always provide good stuffs customer are impress to do again shopping for us .
All said and done, I reckon both are good for us. It depend on customer what they might do shopping in mall nor local markets.
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Suggestion: have
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...so who can buy everything nor what they wants in one place and even save the time eit...
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...oreover, in these days, shopping centers are open everywhere or any city. Therefo...
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Suggestion: of the best
... set, toys, and so on. Furthermore, one of best thing in shopping centers all kind of ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'advantages'' or 'advantage's'?
Suggestion: advantages'; advantage's
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Message: Did you mean 'reducing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: reducing
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'stuffs'' or 'stuff's'?
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... are impress to do again shopping for us . All said and done, I reckon both are...
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Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
...done, I reckon both are good for us. It depend on customer what they might do shopping...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, while, i reckon, in fact, kind of, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01260504202 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31682458904 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672268907563 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.7511997818 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2142857143 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336612891873 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117781197901 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077485674917 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209067035456 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579806854314 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.