Shopping malls have been becoming so popular recently that a growing number of people are likely to go shopping in these facilities, while others still choose traditional markets. This essay will state the advantages of each marketplace and elaborate on my preference.
To begin with, a shopping center offers a variety of reliable items from famous brands under one roof for customers to choose which is time-saving, and convenient. Also, both malls and plazas are equipped with high-end technologies especially camera surveillance monitors that pose better security. The other factor available on mega-complex is paying by credit cards, so the buyers could select which paying method is more suitable. As society is developing rapidly, many people have replaced cash with a credit card that offers better safety for both the sellers and the customers.
At the same time, local markets have their benefits in certain situations. Firstly, the local market offers a comparatively cheaper price based on different sellers, so people might purchase a product at a better price. Secondly, several unique products are merely available in traditional markets. For instance, handmade crafts are only sold in local market places, because they are produced on a small scale with a little number by locals.
In conclusion, shopping malls and local markets offer different positive experiences to the customers because of their different benefits. I personally prefer going to modern market places for shopping, thanks to reliable products, modern technologies built-in, and paying methods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51440329218 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76271790183 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6661184163 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187266714232 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604845544384 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476728857505 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118031781492 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555580098347 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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