Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr Khalid,
I am writing this letter to request a seat in the Sketchup computer course which will commence from next week onwards.
This course requires the students to have a primary level certification but ,unfortunately I was unable to get one and was hoping if you could help me with this situation. Sketchup course has been my area of interest since my high school days and I have gained theoretical knowledge of the same.
Even though the elementary classes were available before, I did not attend them because my parents could not afford the tuition fees. Also, I am planning to opt for an interior design degree in future and this course might help me improve my skills.
I am requesting you to grant me a scholarship as I would like to gain knowledge of these skills. If required, I am ready to give an entry test for enrollment. I understand that it might be a little difficult for you but I would be grateful if you could make an exception in my case.
I would appreciate your help! Thank you for your consideration.
Your's sincerely,
Rahul Dev
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o have a primary level certification but ,unfortunately I was unable to get one an...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72896132565 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5818925138 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258692813606 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856094342293 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527727896528 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12839686259 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528510014669 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o have a primary level certification but ,unfortunately I was unable to get one an...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72896132565 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5818925138 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258692813606 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856094342293 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527727896528 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12839686259 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528510014669 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.