Many countries are struggling with the problem of lack of the water. What are the causes for this , and what can be done to eliminate this problem
In the modern times , our world is surviving through many major problems , and one of them is the lack of water for drinking,and to wash , as well as for the household uses. In this essay , we will discuss it's cause for the shortage , and what could be done in order to eliminate this problem.
There can be many causes for the lack of water , a country is facing.
As I believe , the main cause of this could be the improper management of the water to use. For example: people just use the water whenever they want , just to wash their cars , bikes, and even in the water parks , without thinking about the consequences of wasting the water. people don't have any proper management to use the water in a proper way . so that it can be utilised as according to the need..
water plays a pivotal part in everyone's life , even for the human beings , or for the animals , and plants. we all need water . so it is necessary to take crucial steps for saving the water on the earth. The most affective way to save the water,might be the water harvesting system , and managing of water beds to store enough water .
For instance , government can aslo take initiatives to develop proper water beds , so that the rain water can be collected , and got purify for the use in the homes , or in industries. Moreover people should also comprehent their responsibilities to save the water , and do not waste it , and utilise it whenever it requires.
In conclusion , water is necessary for the living on the earth , and the lack of the water is a serious problem ,we shouldn't negelect it. our government can ta initiatives in order to control the misuse of the water by imposing some penalties on the people who waste the water.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5522875817 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52151682828 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493464052288 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 0.809619238477 1482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5560955317 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399051488489 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151352786297 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120454601095 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249913005271 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126418825329 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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