it is argued that getting married before finishing their school or getting a job is not a good choice.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people doing jobs to pay their bills before finish their schooling. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that people getting marriage and getting jobs before finishing their school can not only contribute to enhance the standard of their life but also provides their utilities and rents. They feel mature and more responsible in their early age, and it leads to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to a wide range of advantages being offered by people getting married and doing jobs before finishing their school, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective but also enhance their productivity and standard of their life with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needleless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead. as far as, augmenting their chances of a better life is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, can one broaden their horizons. Thus learning such essential attributes as responsibilities, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of people getting married and doing jobs before finishing their school.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that, the benefits of people getting married and doing jobs before finishing their school are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 5.60731707317 517% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 965.302439024 149% => OK
No of words: 292.0 196.424390244 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91780821918 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63727093287 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 106.607317073 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517123287671 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 283.868780488 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9375288494 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.571428571 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320605079568 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114020456737 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133094426601 0.0843802449381 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222629042849 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690895099252 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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