Advances in science, technology, and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Over the last century, scientific discoveries and technological breakthroughs had detrimental impacts on shaping our lifestyles and raising our life span. Therefore, it is a common belief that this is the most ideal time to live. I strongly agree with this notion due to several reasons.
Firstly, advents in all fields benefit our lifestyle, especially in communicating habits. For instance, Messenger, the software that is well-known for sending messages and calling videos online, is used by billion of users every day. The main reason for this is that unlike in the past, when people had to write a letter or travel long distances in order to meet face-to-face, the app’s function allows people to have conversations online via the Internet, without worrying about geographical barriers and time-consuming. Thus, this example illustrates a good explanation of how technological advancement contributes to modernizing our method of interacting.
Secondly, these breakthroughs are essential to lengthen the average lifespan. The main reason is that scientific investigation helps patients and doctors to treat dangerous diseases. HIV, for example, had killed hundreds of million people in the 1980s. However, its impact can be slower with fast diagnosis and MRNA medicine these days. This saves millions of patients every year, which directly contributes not only to decreasing the mortality rate but also fosters economic growth as more people are recovered from critical conditions. Therefore, life expectancy would continue to rise thanks to society's developments.
In conclusion, 100 years of evolution have postponed the aging process and changed our living ways. While some people contend that there is another era containing the best living conditions, I firmly believe that these days are the most suitable time to be alive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56939501779 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02777758252 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67615658363 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8514457265 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16004114202 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486090748218 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411819004034 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999855729553 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396451390312 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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