nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. What are causes of culture conflicts? How can government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?
In today’s modern society, many people from all over the world are working and studying in the same countries, due to this phenomenon culture conflicts may arise. This essay will analyse several factors, and provide a solution for this problem.
There are a number of reasons why culture conflicts happen. Firstly, people who live in cosmopolitan cities come from many different nations, that they have different viewpoints about others’ tradition and culture leading to the quarrels occurring. Secondly, limited lens brought to many times when we encounter people from different backgrounds, we prioritize our own perspective, and we always believe that we have the right behaviors. Finally, stereotypes may result in the conflicts, we all have our own ways of living or hobbies and the differences in these factors can make us annoyed and have quarrels with others.
From my point of view a number of following measures could be adopted to mitigate the problem. I think the most obvious solution is to celebrate a monthly event or festival to include all the people in the city that they are living. For example, a monthly festival will be held on Sunday every week for people to come there and they will talk together about their life, share their daily stories, or sit around and watch a movie together. By doing this, the relationship between people will be strengthened, the distance between people will be narrowed. A further step is to train children all over the world have the right attitude toward others when they are at early age. Take for example, children will be trained to be polite to the elderly, give others the same treatment that they would like to receive from them and try not to hurt someone when it is unnecessary. As a result, they will receive the love and appreciation from others. Another solution is that government should evaluate people before allowing them to enter their country. For instance, students who want to go overseas to study should undergo a lot of screening process to justify they do not have any false background. Therefore, the government will not face trouble from these students in the future.
In conclusion, this problem could be caused by limited lens and differences between tradition and culture which could be tackled by celebrating a monthly event or festival to include all the people in the city that they are living and
train children all over the world have the right attitude toward others when they are at an early age.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2157.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06338028169 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04137039434 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488262910798 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9512801351 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.882352941 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0588235294 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294292321964 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950535201789 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069997061545 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13886904887 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728459125844 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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