A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years or to pay for two open-air concerts.
It has asked for feedback from the general public.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter:
• describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team
• summaries the benefits of paying for the concerts
• say how you think the company should spend the money
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my deep gratitude to your company for the decision to sponsor our community. I am deeply grateful for your willingness to invest in the development of a youth sports team, or, alternatively, to organize two outdoor concerts.
Needless to say, supporting a sports team financially will bring tangible benefits to both the team and your business. With your sponsorship, they will definitely learn, improve their skills, and develop their sports potential, while promoting your brand. Perhaps some of them will bring glory in the future in professional competitions so that we as a community can be proud of ourselves.
On the other hand, organizing two open-air concerts is also a good idea, as people will enjoy the performance immensely. Some local groups will have the opportunity to showcase their talents, which will certainly contribute to the development of our culture and heritage.
I am sure that any of your initiatives will be of great benefit to our community. However, I believe that supporting a local sports team is more outstanding than increasing the number of music lovers by sponsoring a concert. The concerts would be temporary entertainment for the locals, but the provision of young athletes would be remembered for a long time and would provide many reasons for celebration and pride.
Thanks again for the great initiative.
Yours faithfully
Alex Sam.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2380952381 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97015760061 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7420849611 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.833333333 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265486287714 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909524430992 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058301973605 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144580776986 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692478967624 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.