People’s behaviour (for example, their table manners and they way they dress) varies from country to country. When traveling to a different country, people should copy the behaviour and habits of the inhabitants of the country they visit. Do you agree or disagree?
People’s manners and styles are diverse across the world, and it deeply depend on where I live in. Many individuals argue that visitors should follow the natives’ behaviour and habits. Personally, I agree that it need to be conducted by them rely on two main areas.
To begin with, globalization is an ubiquitous trend in the modern era, which can occur to the disappear of any local civilization. In fact, every country has their own culture which is identitied to the whole world. Thus, some foreigner who come to the others nation should copy the behavior and habit of this local residents, which will adapt with the life them. If not, they can make not only the bad impression but also the insight to their nation. For instance, if anyone doesn’t wear a long pant when they come to a Vietnamese Pagoda, they will never come to this place.
Second, experience is one of the benefit that these visitor can gain when they are on the foreign nation. If they obey the behaviour and manner from this local people, they will be welcomed by these resident. That’s mean this foreign guess not only learn a foreign language but also a new culture, which they have never experienced before. Moreover, the attraction to this people can lead to the improve in the budget about tourist, so government will use this in order to rise their reputation on the whole world.
To conclude, not only do they respect to this local resident, but they will gain many experience for this life after. Consequently, I strongly believe that each visitor should copy the manner and behavior of local citizen to merge with any one of them.
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... citizen to merge with any one of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, second, so, thus, for instance, in fact, on the whole, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74558303887 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45048863593 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558303886926 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4510522147 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.9285714286 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24583862357 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818390784166 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524915354377 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140726422147 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027445920165 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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