The diagram details the process of making leather products.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This diagram illustrates the leather products making process and there are five precise stages in this process beginning with the initial collection of animals skins and ending with the eventual production of leather products which are vey very popular and important to humans.
At the first stage the skins of the animals will be collected by hunters and dried very cleanly, Then, it will be transferred to a factory where the second phase will begin and it contains two compact operations the first is called washing the animal skin from any dust and mud, Then, soaking the whole skin it in the lime water to remove any bloody smell and make it serialized from any bacterial and remove salt. Then, at the third phase the flattening process will be applied to make the animal skin even and doesn’t contain any air in it and become smooth and not rough.
After that, for a distinct color and appearance of anime skin, another soaking process will be used, but this time a vegetable matter like bark, leaves of tree and plants will be mixed in the water instead of lime and this operation very essential and it is called tanning. Finally, the polishing phase will start, and the animal skin will be polished precisely and neatly to become ready to be delivered to the factory where many designs will be created, colored, and modeled for human use, for instance, belts, wallets, shoes, furniture and clothing are all leather products and their price vary between cheap or expensive and leather products are unique and popular.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, second, so, then, third, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 24.0 6.8 353% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 262.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84351145038 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28550752902 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538167938931 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 283.868780488 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 22.4926829268 231% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.2171350672 43.030603864 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 253.8 112.824112599 225% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.4 22.9334400587 228% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.6 5.23603664747 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136939563597 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915744751533 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733074778649 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120502076954 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771086041267 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.6 13.2329268293 209% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.16 61.2550243902 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 10.3012195122 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.68 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 11.4329268293 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.9970731707 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 11.0658536585 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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