The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration depicts the various steps in which chocolate is manufactured.
Overall, it is clear that the production of chocolate includes ten stages, beginning with growing and harvesting red pods cacao and ending with producing chocolate liqueur.
Firstly, cacao trees are native to South America Africa, Indonesia and then they tend towards red harvested and taken from white beans. In the next step for fermentation, those are dehydrated under the hot sun. After that, they are packed in large sacks before being delivered to the factory with the help of trucks or lorries.
Regarding the eighth step, beans are roasted at a high temperate (350 Celcius degree) in a drying oven. Next, those are crushed with a view to getting rid of the outer shell. This is followed by the stage in which chocolate liqueur is made thanks to pressing inner part and finally they are used to mix with other products to take to the market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 118, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'pods'' or 'pod's'?
Suggestion: pods'; pod's
...ginning with growing and harvesting red pods cacao and ending with producing chocola...
^^^^
Line 4, column 290, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to mixing'.
Suggestion: used to mixing
...ressing inner part and finally they are used to mix with other products to take to the mark...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, regarding, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94904458599 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48298195716 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687898089172 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6393581727 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.125 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0533569700277 0.215688989381 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.021468052232 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031526725197 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.040450199379 0.15604864568 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338894756855 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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