To meet the growing needs of food for the increasing population, the country should make use of edible insects as food. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but affect negatively nature too. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?
As the evolution of human beings, food is one of the key elements for population growth, edible insects are now considered to be the new ingredients. Essentially, some people are holdings opinions that may be either insect could be health-damaging, the natural world would be worst. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects.
On the one hand, a majority of nature insects are actually poisonous as social media normally warns everywhere on the internet. For instance, a small village used to report about a case of 30 people in danger after a festival eating poison fried spiders without research carefully. This kind of spider only lives deep in the jungle, far from humans which leads to people not being familiar with them and some misunderstood happening. Not everyone could have the opportunities to learn and educate themselves about which is the types of insects they can eat or not. Same with insects is not easy for even farmers to control their numbers, weather nowadays is changing differently, affecting many species.
On the other hand, considering food in some countries is becoming expensive and rarely seen in Africa for example, scientists may have found some kinds of insects could replace normal animals. A documentary not long ago had information about cockroaches having a high amount of protein inside them, our future descendants might follow this lead to find their new sources of food. If needs of food stand in the first priority line, anything even insects are sources of nutrition to humans.
Therefore, edible insects being eaten could bring about certain benefits, but their negative consequences should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, look, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19047619048 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72294496503 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648351648352 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1684491469 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.083333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287600773703 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978291547722 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449126415811 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163968522818 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324208020028 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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