The charts below show the percentage of electricity consumed by different
sectors in Eastern Australia in 2007 and 2010.
The pie charts demonstrate data about the amount of electricity consumed by various fields in Eastern Australia in 2007 and 2010.
Looking at the chart, it is immediately obvious that only transport, agriculture, and mining are unchanged while the rest of the sectors experience a downward trend, except for residental and other metals. And in both 2007 and 2010, residental and commercial used the most electricity
Residental and commercial were the largest consumers of electricity, made up 27% of total electricity, followed by aluminum and manufacturing with the same consumption, at 12%. while the figures for other metals and mining were slightly lower, at 11% and 9% corresponding. In contrast, electricity consumption from transport and agriculture accounted for only 1%.
In 2010, while the electricity consumption share of other metals increased significantly by 7%, the electricity consumption share of the commercial, manufacturing, and aluminum sectors decreased slightly to 23%, 11%, and 9% respectively. Meanwhile, the power consumption rates of other sectors are similar to the original data.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 178, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...ring with the same consumption, at 12%. while the figures for other metals and mining...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, while, except for, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73652694611 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29668862706 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574850299401 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2890017141 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.857142857 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242862263413 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11229751216 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113653086117 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173863354848 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121891284061 0.0819641961636 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 11.4140731707 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.