introduce myself
Hello, nice to meet you, let me introduce myself. my name is nt, you can call me thi. I’m 19 years old. I’m from tien giang. I’m a student at ct university. My major is English studies.
I like learning English studies because:
+ I want to travel to many countries all over the world.
+ I don’t want to be despised.
+ I don’t want to be out of date in the era of globalization.
+ I want to earn a lot of money.
+ I want to work in foreign company.
+ I want to escape me poverty.
I’m THI- Talent, Humor and never Irresponsible. I like to attract to people’s attention with funny words “ I don’t get older, I level up”. Yes, but for work, study and social interaction I have a very serious attitude and always try to learn. I’m an easy going person that works well with everyone. I enjoy being around different types of people and I like to always challenge myself to improve at everything I do.
I enjoy reading books and newspaper. It makes me open my knowledge with information very useful. I often read books in the evening before I go to bed. I enjoy listening to music like UK US KPOP VPOP and I like watching cartoons like conan, Naruto, fairy tail, and so on. It makes me laugh and relax very much.
Now, I’m studying hard in university. I hope within this year, my English will improve more, I will conquer English B1 and B2. I’m trying to day by day.
It’s time to say goodbye.
thank you for reading
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...e to meet you, let me introduce myself. my name is nt, you can call me thi. I’m 19...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... I’m 19 years old. I’m from tien giang. I’m a student at ct university. My major ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...like learning English studies because: + I want to travel to many countries all...
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... to many countries all over the world. + I don’t want to be despised. ...
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... + I don’t want to be despised. + I don’t want to be out of date in the ...
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Suggestion:
...t of date in the era of globalization. + I want to earn a lot of money. ...
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... + I want to earn a lot of money. + I want to work in foreign company. ...
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... + I want to work in foreign company. + I want to escape me poverty. I’m THI-...
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... myself to improve at everything I do. I enjoy reading books and newspaper. It m...
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... I go to bed. I enjoy listening to music like UK US KPOP VPOP and I like watching...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thank
...day by day. It’s time to say goodbye. thank you for reading
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 20.9802955665 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45112781955 5.00649968141 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49627750542 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624060150376 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 4.6157635468 498% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 12.6551724138 213% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 9.0 20.5024630542 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1007919394 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 43.8518518519 104.977214359 42% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.85185185185 20.9669160288 47% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.62962962963 7.25397266985 9% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.12807881773 315% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 6.9802955665 215% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0777831797357 0.242375264174 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0182302833608 0.0925447433944 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074039015255 0.071462118173 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0171268193203 0.151781067708 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463025032564 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.5 12.6369458128 36% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.26 53.1260098522 149% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.9458128079 40% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.05 11.5310837438 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.32886699507 81% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.0 9.94827586207 30% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.3980295567 54% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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