Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and the telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.
One of the technological innovations that has indeed revolutionized the world we live in is none other than the social networking sites, which is the outcome of 'internet'. Known as the inter-connection of networks, internet became so popular in the recent period of 10 years. Long back, people faced many barriers in communication and people could not contact their relatives and friends staying overseas. But now-a-days, even we do not care to go to the nearest shopping malls. We just order the times through internet and the items reach us soon with a click of a mouse. Social networkin...
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