You have recently attended a work related course Write a letter to your manager and say What course was it and when did you take it What did you like about it What improvements can be made in the future
Dear Sir,
My name is Surbhi Batra. I am writing this letter to inform you about the course I did last month.
Last month, when, because of Covid-19 office was operating on 50% staff, i took it as an opportunity and joined a course to use this time efficiently. The course was on 'Time Management' by Mahesh Thakkar. The course lasted for 15 days. What's more, one hour of daily class gave skills to save hours of life.
I learnt many innovative strategies from 'time stealing' to 'meeting deadlines'. But, the most important lesson that amazed me was on how can we successfully complete targets in time without panicking.
This course would be very helpful not only for me, for our office staff as well since time management is the key to growth. This course will also improve communication between co-workers as these days professionals barely get time to talk to their colleagues due to lack of time. Therefore, this only one course will help to boost production, sales, and progress of company positively.
Look forward to apply these skills efficiently.
Yours faithfully,
Surbhi Batra
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d-19 office was operating on 50% staff, i took it as an opportunity and joined a ...
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Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...Thakkar. The course lasted for 15 days. Whats more, one hour of daily class gave skil...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...improve communication between co-workers as these days professionals barely get t...
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Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ue to lack of time. Therefore, this only one course will help to boost production...
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Line 6, column 14, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to applying'.
Suggestion: to applying
...s of company positively. Look forward to apply these skills efficiently. Yours fait...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91351351351 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65947044603 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702702702703 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6977820468 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9230769231 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2307692308 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205670127415 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687415760432 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759276295758 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101560872872 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878060470105 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.