You use the local swimming pool often and during one of your visits, you have encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter... describe what the problem was , What the swimming pool staff have done about it. Suggest your own solution to the problem.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am one of the Platinum member of your swimming pool club and every week I visit here. Here, I would like to draw your attention towards a problem which I faced in my last visit that was over crowding of pool area as well as very much noisy.
Last Sunday, when I reached at pool complex on time, which is alloted only to platinum members, I found the place was unusually crowdy. Some teenagers were having a pool party there and they occupied more than half of the pool area. As you know there are limited number of seats for sunbasking and unfortunately all were occupied by them. I was with my wife, we both trubbled getting a seat for us. It almost wasted half of our designated time Moreover, I joined here to get some relaxing, peacful, and quality time, however I did not get all of these. I immideately talked to the authorized person who was on duty that time. Initially, he assured me that it would be over withen five-ten minutes. But that party long lasted for around one hour. Despite my continuous complaints, they did not do anything.
I would like to suggest that management should allot different times for parties and take a closer look at the starting and finishing times. So that, your regular and important clients do not get disturbed otherwise it may affect your members count.
I amd looking forward to hearing from you.
Thanking you,
John Carter
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.628 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39507828682 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2339823201 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1333333333 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206726759413 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610391170835 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570047745527 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121820325531 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702224336924 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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