Globalization is creating a world of one culture and destroying national identity.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
It is certainly that the globalized world brings us problems on damaging the our own national identities. Due to the fast pace of the today’s world, to some degree I do believe that there are some cultures and self-identities that have lost in these days.
For some people who may think that it is not a big deal or even consider that it would be better if we only have one culture in this world. With this, my guess is because of the racist inequality, one culture could probably reduce some of these problems in the future. For example, there are still a lot of immigrant families who experience some unfair treatments because of their identities. And also, some stereotypes like Asian parents are strict to their children and people from Africa are mostly suffering from poverty. This point of view can be reasonable why some people think this way, which I understand.
However, maintaining our identity is also quite important to us. Since we can learn history from our background and know ourselves better by recognizing our identity. Some people nowadays, especially those who born overseas, may had no opportunity to learn about where their ancestors originally from and what their cultures are all about. For instance, in Taiwan some of my friends whose families immigrated from south Asian countries have lost their ability to speak the languages which their relatives can speak fluently. Few of them even show indifference to learn their cultures, which I think it’s not their responsibility but it is definitely a pity.
To conclude, although some people think there is a good reason on having one culture only, I still think that to maintain our identities are way more important. We should see these difference with more open-mind view in this globalized world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97993311037 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6858457111 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561872909699 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7182957664 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.357142857 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172117586474 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679216600089 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06002690349 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129966937728 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605232517386 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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