Task 2: Governments should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, many people claim that the authorities should make individuals responsible for concerning their area's environment. In my opinion, I completely agree with this view for several reasons.
Firstly, individuals can completely reduce the polluted conditions in their areas. Thus, people contribute and take care of the environment by some small activities. This can help to improve as well as decrease many kinds of pollution such as air pollution, water pollution and so on which are damaging our habitat. For instance, to reduce air pollution in some megacities, citizens can use some friendly vehicles such as bicycles, electric vehicles, and even walking. Hence, the use of fuels and the levels of contaminated air will be reduced. Another example is that many people should stop using plastic bags as it is one of the main reasons leading to soil pollution. Moreover, individuals can use paper bags instead of using plastic ones. These examples show that individuals can play an important role to protect the environment.
Secondly, the authorities should take some actions to prevent pollution in the world. Specifically, public awareness should be improved on the positive effects of protecting the environment. For example, Singapore is well-known as the country with the healthiest and cleanest environment in the world. This is because of the strict measures with raising awareness of citizens to avoid the negative actions which affect the environment and ecosystem. In addition, children also should be taught to understand the importance of our habitat. To give a clear example, in Vietnam, many schools often hold campaigns to clean the rubbish in some public areas such as forests or coastal areas.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that individuals can preserve and improve their local habitat. Additionally, the government should take more measures to raise awareness of citizens about the importance of the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44554455446 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93869140181 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531353135314 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1085308434 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.94444444444 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160254750795 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529047835445 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562165519697 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124165144674 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698691223673 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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