Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems. Others think that there are more important issues.Discuss both views and give your opinion
Some citizens believe that scientific examination had better attend on solving globe health problems. However, I am of the opinion that scientific research should care about more significant things.
On the one hand, it is believed that scientific investigation revolve about working out world heath problems. Firstly, it is irrefutable that human health is the most essential, without strength we can not do anything including investigate or do anything related to the activity of creating material wealth. Additionally, concentrating on improving world health problem can lead to a stronger economy and the world is more and more developed and up-to-date. Secondly, nowadays there are many appearances of outbreaks of infectious diseases and it can not only spread from country to country but also impact trade and travel. Therefore, it is really necessary that we should create and progress defensive measures to prevent disease outbreaks, detect and respond to so as not to affect public health.
On the other hand, I am in favor of the idea that scientific had better focus on more important things for some following justifications. It is indisputable that global climate change also has remarkable effects on humans. This would cause more severe weather, natural disaster, crises with resources and the spread of disease related to weather. Another compelling reason for the idea is that the education system is getting worse and worse, leading to a lack of education in many places, which is appears millions of children throughout the global that are of the age to be in primary school are not enrolled in school, this could be due to racism on poverty as well as inequality.
Inconclusion, although scientific research should attend to explaining world health problems, it seems to me that they had better involve on more significant things because of the above reasons.
- the bar chart compare the proportion of school boy in two separate age groups who took part in playing 5 kinds of sport in the UK in 2010 overall it can be seen that the percentage of boys 6 11 were generally more likely to play sport than the older group 61
- The table shows the data on the proportion of schoolboys in two separate age groups who took part in playing 5 kinds of sport in the UK in the year 2010 Overall more schoolboys aged 6 11 years old are interested in playing sports than them in the older gr 90
- Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems Others think that there are more important issues Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems Others think that there are more important issues Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27906976744 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86969351891 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574750830565 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4872761178 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.416666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223680543112 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822129963935 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733703976774 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145620773885 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545277593152 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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