Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems. Others think that there are more important issues. Discuss both views and give your opinion
With the development of society, researching to meet the demands of people’s health is essential. Nevertheless, protecting the natural environment is equally important. In this essay, I will discuss both sides.
Disease rates around the world have increased rapidly. It is easily understood why research now mainly concentrates on world health. Many fatal diseases have been caused by environmental pollution, food shortages, and water shortages in the last few decades. Besides studying medical treatments, making up vaccine to control diseases is vital to the health of a community. To be protected from diseases, scientists focus on researching advances in medical techniques and equipment, inventing new drugs.
Nevertheless, there are some more pressing problems that need more attention, such as environmental issues and technology advancements.
Gas emissions from factories and exhaust fumes from transportation are among the contributing factors to global warming. If we continue to pollute the air, the eco-environment will be seriously damaged. Scientists must therefore focus on finding out how to release pollution which affects global health.
In conclusion, taking care of people’s health should be a top priority. Besides researching world health problems, environmental problems must also be addressed.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94791666667 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25400394386 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697916666667 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8604393654 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.5714285714 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7142857143 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211382546738 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669944226946 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551003402772 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117134186507 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506538240278 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.64 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.78 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94791666667 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25400394386 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697916666667 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8604393654 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.5714285714 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7142857143 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211382546738 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669944226946 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551003402772 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117134186507 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506538240278 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.64 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.78 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.