You use the local swimming pool often, and during one of your visits, you have encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager.
In your letter
describe what the problem was
tell what the swimming pool staff have done about it
suggest your own solution to the problem.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter in order to complain about the swimming pool in our neighborhood. I have been using it for a long time and never encounter this issue before. Yesterday when I was swimming in the pool, I notice there are some tiles at the bottom of the pool broken and I stepped on a small piece of broken tile by accident, which is quite dangerous. These small pieces might be everywhere as water flows and it could result in potential harm to other residents.
I told the manager, Mike who handles swimming pool about this issue right after I left and asked him to deal with this matter as soon as possible. I am not sure what he has done so far, but when I went to the pool this morning, I saw the broken tiles are still not taken care of. I am really not satisfied about this, as he should take this matter into consideration seriously. No swimming should be allowed due to this potential threat, but obviously the he is not doing the right thing.
This is the reason why I am telling you about this problem and I hope you could tackle the problem. Please ask Mike or someone else who is in charge of this to prohibit swimming in the pool for now and recruit a professional team to come and repair the broken tile. If possible, please let them check the whole pool to ensure there is no other issues. I believe this is the best solution for this matter.
Please let me know what you think. I look forward to your response.
Yours sincerely,
Jerry Wang
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...oken tiles are still not taken care of. I am really not satisfied about this, as ...
^
Line 5, column 453, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'he'?
Suggestion: the; he
...to this potential threat, but obviously the he is not doing the right thing. This i...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 280.0 206.0 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.375 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30272409665 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7717863674 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6666666667 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.13333333333 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240952042627 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082783078107 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518094630368 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14628313149 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340393819515 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...oken tiles are still not taken care of. I am really not satisfied about this, as ...
^
Line 5, column 453, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'he'?
Suggestion: the; he
...to this potential threat, but obviously the he is not doing the right thing. This i...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 280.0 206.0 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.375 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30272409665 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7717863674 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6666666667 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.13333333333 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240952042627 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082783078107 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518094630368 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14628313149 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340393819515 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.