In some countries, the governments pay the unemployed people on a weekly basis. How would this impact people as well as government? Do you agree or disagree with that?
As governments in some countries are concerned more about their residents, people who are not working can obtain basic payment. In my opinion, governments should consider further about how to allocate unemployment expense to avoid potential financial issue.
On the one hand, some people are unemployed for reasons which they should not be responsible for. For instance, when a company is facing financial problem or even a country is encountering economic crisis, there is a number of employees being laid off to cut the cost. However, it does not mean they are not contributing to their companies. Therefore, they deserve to collect unemployment pays from the government. The expense of this part is not so enormous that government may not suffer a heavy pressure in finance.
On the other hand, there is a small portion of people who has not been working for a long time, such as housekeepers, and they are not supposed to receive any income for not going to work, because they are not making contributions to companies or society. Meanwhile, governments should not provide any pays for this group of people, since it is not only aggravating their burden, but also unfair to others who are working for the country. If people realize that they could gain some money without having to work, they would probably decide to stay at home.
To conclude, I believe that a certain amount of unemployed residents is acceptable towards government and they should distribute the expense on the proper groups of people who are not currently working. If more people are getting money for unemployment, government's financial capability may be over-loaded.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09963099631 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83895525564 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568265682657 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.363728318 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23786378701 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953266952423 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512595869083 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16590418195 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389041802691 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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