Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollution and housing problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statements?
It is acceptable that the death rate is increasing in the modern era. Society is affected by pollution environment and dirty housing. That is why, illness is increasing with the passage of time. some people assert that the Government should be provided good accommodation and clean climate. I will shed light on the statement in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the first and foremost, the public is suffering from diseases like respiratory. In the modern era, needs of man increases. Thus, factories are built in urban areas. This makes the environment dirty. As a result, smoke is being emitted by new industries. Therefore, the Government should implement new law regarding this situation. The industry colony should be far away from the inhabited areas. In addition, traffic has also increased its peak. Everyone is travelling to job and education. They have their own vehicles such as car, bike. Thus, roads are crowded from this modern facility. The roads are narrow as well as break. The Authority should be built new wide roads along with repair break roads. For example, public transport should be provided from the Government.
On the other hand, there is another reason, residents migrating from their residence to the city to work. So, the population of the city has increased, which is why, housing is expensive. They are not able to stay at this place. As a result, they buy cheap. This is dirty. Sometimes, many people stay on the road, where there is a huge infection. So, many diseases like malaria, cancer, lung infections are spreading. The Minister of Health Department should develop some rules in place of home. Employers should create a labor colony of poor employees who give freebies. For example, flies and mosquitoes are developing in the city, because there is no clean system.
In the end, many of the people living in this way are having dangerous diseases. The Government will be provided many amenities so that, people will be remained without pitiable condition.
- Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time This can benefit teenagers and the community as well To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollution and housing problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statements 73
- Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollution and housing problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statements 84
- Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollution and housing problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statements 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05421686747 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64216208197 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572289156627 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 16.0721442886 193% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.5912878145 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.1290322581 106.682146367 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.7096774194 20.7667163134 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.61290322581 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176663030474 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406111014894 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039268040679 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106756227586 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028787194117 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 50.2224549098 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.83 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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