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| 2024-10-31 | Fifi13 | 76 | view |
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| 2024-08-25 | pezhmanlamei | 73 | view |
| 2024-08-19 | Barry Shi | 70 | view |
- what is the most effective way of getting information about a job of interest asking friends sending a letter to companies searching on job advertisements 70
- The populations of many fish species are rapidly disappearing due to overfishing and pollution There are many ways to address this issue and one of the most popular is aquaculture also known as fish farming Raising fish in a controlled environment has man 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In 20 years there will be less pollution in the air than there is today 76
- Is better to take a break after high school to work or as vacation or go immediately to college 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People should keep trying to reach their goals even if they seem impossible to achieve Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position 70
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...endent on others. They have to deal with the real people and the real tough world...
^^
Line 3, column 621, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... of parents house at the age of eighteen . By taking this huge step I became more ...
^^
Line 3, column 1109, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ssfull businesswoman in my hometown. If i had not worked hard and started an inde...
^
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ng the real friends from the fake ones. As they say a friend in need is a friend i...
^^
Line 5, column 549, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ery thankfull for the experience and if i got back in time I would choose to do i...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, i feel, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46296296296 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57738169142 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516203703704 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0765396863 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6363636364 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278026299197 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732547763168 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903248028713 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200096433532 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044172379118 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...endent on others. They have to deal with the real people and the real tough world...
^^
Line 3, column 621, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... of parents house at the age of eighteen . By taking this huge step I became more ...
^^
Line 3, column 1109, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ssfull businesswoman in my hometown. If i had not worked hard and started an inde...
^
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ng the real friends from the fake ones. As they say a friend in need is a friend i...
^^
Line 5, column 549, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ery thankfull for the experience and if i got back in time I would choose to do i...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, i feel, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46296296296 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57738169142 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516203703704 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0765396863 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6363636364 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278026299197 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732547763168 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903248028713 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200096433532 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044172379118 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.