Some people believe it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
These days, individuals have become so sluggish and anticipate that the things should happen promptly with next to no hard errand or dedication.In this article we'll see about individuals who acknowledge awful circumstances like an inadmissible work or deficiency of cash while there are other people who contend that we can battle and advance these circumstances.
The greater part of the youngsters these days anticipate that things should happen rapidly and they pay special attention to progress immediately.Even these individuals need a superior life, however they are too lethargic to even consider placing in the efforts.These rules make them go to a task regardless of whether it compensate fairly or regardless of whether they detest it.For model, an old buddy of mine from school actually works in the organization he joined first and acquires not exactly the majority of our clump students.Even however he's not inspired by his work, his dread to face challenges and absence of inspiration has kept him in a similar impasse profession for almost a decade.These are the sort of individuals who feel that facing challenges could disrupt their vocation thus they stay in an inadmissible position which saves money on an extensive stretch.
Then there is one more arrangement of individuals, who like to face challenges and try sincerely so they beat awful circumstances like deficiency of cash or exhausting jobs.In disdain of realizing that facing challenges isn't generally an ideal choice, these individuals are prepared to invest the hard energy to conquer these sort of situations.For model, an ex-associate of mine secured the position so exhausting and chose to begin a business.So he quit the place of employment and begun pursuing his dream.Even however he confronted heaps of difficulties in the underlying phases of his business profession, he has now turned into an effective finance manager and residing his fantasy.
As I would see it, the world these days is unforgiving and very competitive.In request to survive,people need to work on their abilities and ought to work hard.Being in an impasse work for a long time with any fulfillment or cash will just make us lament in the close to future.So it is smarter to try sincerely and improve these terrible circumstances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, so, then, thus, well, while, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23097826087 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13207493077 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578804347826 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 92.0 20.2975951904 453% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 223.237961602 49.4020404114 452% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 481.25 106.682146367 451% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 92.0 20.7667163134 443% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.5 7.06120827912 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0581385742367 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398376132917 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00858927981234 0.0667982634062 13% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0398376132917 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00858927981234 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 49.2 13.0946893788 376% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -30.36 50.2224549098 -60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.44779559118 273% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 40.4 11.3001002004 358% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.24 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.1 8.58950901804 141% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 38.8 10.1190380762 383% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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