These days it is very common to have people from two different generations mix in the same workplace. Are there more advantages or disadvantages to this situation?
Nowadays, it is regular to have people of various generations together in the same organisation. I personally agree with this approach as the benefits of this are more than the disadvantages.
There are a great number of advantages to having employees of different ages. Firstly, older persons have higher experiences in work, with the advice the younger can improve their work and avoid mistakes. Furthermore, older folk tend to be more cautious in many aspects, they can help the inexperienced when it comes to a tough decision. For instance, sometimes, when youthful persons are in stressful surroundings the senior can help them to be calmer by advising. Lastly, the younger will feels more comfortable with older personnel around because it is spontaneous of humans to feel safe when there is someone that can protect them.
On the other hand, younger people can help the older because of their youthfulness and modernity. One problem that is remarkable is the technology. Younger employees tend to have more knowledge about the instrument than the older ones because they grow up in an era with technology as the dominant part of life. For instance, when there is a problem with the software a younger person is the one who can fix it properly. Moreover, younger personnel tend to have a more modish viewpoint. This can helps the older person to change the aspect of their work and adapt it to the generation.
However, having people with different generations can cause some problems in some situations due to differences in opinions, habits, and backgrounds. For instance, in Thailand, while seniors are likely to be more conservative with the customs, the younger tend to be more flexible. These issues can lead to controversy when they do not accept each other aspects.
In conclusion, It is clear that having different generations of employees provides more merits than demerits. The older can help the younger when they need help, whereas the younger can help the older in many ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0664652568 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79722091187 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483383685801 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4642654451 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16226905161 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679215614016 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655224283289 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123915510183 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619233242844 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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