The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004
The given line graph reveals how many grams of fish and three particular types of meat were consumed on a weekly basis by each person in one of the European countries over the 25- year period from 1979 to 2004 .
Overall, by far the highest amount of consumption was seen in chicken in 2004 ,yet the lowest quantity belonged to fish consumption . Moreover , the figures for beef and lamb experienced a considerable decrease towards the end .
According to the line graph , the figure for chicken consumption stood at just below 150 grams at the beginning of the period . After that, it saw a noticeable increase to approximately 200 grams in 1989, rising further by about 50 grams , with a slight fluctuation at the end of the period . While the figure for the fish consumption maintained almost unchanged at 50 grams or so during the given years .
As for the lamb consumption , it decreased from roughly 220 grams in 1979 to about 150 grams in 1994 , falling further by some 100 grams in the next years. Furthermore , there can be seen a gradual decline in the consumption of lamb , decreasing from 150 grams to more than 50 grams till the end .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.695 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66222708511 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4007391385 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.375 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18531645487 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839390011123 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713777581389 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122205640291 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591336071946 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.