Some people consider computers to be more of a hindrance than a help Others believe that they have greatly increased human potential How could computers be considered a hindrance

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Some people consider computers to be more of a hindrance than a help. Others believe that they have greatly increased human potential.
How could computers be considered a hindrance?

In recent years, our life style become more better. A lot of digital devices have been invented such as computers, robots. In the past, people did everything by self. They recorded everything in especial book, used their mind to calculated. But, today all this job has been done by computers.

In fact, computers have al lot of benefits. First of all, people do their job more easier and faster than the past. Secondly, when we use computer, we remove human mistake. Human can forget, or do a mistake when he or she do calculated or record something. But computers do not do such as mistakes. Fi...

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Sentence: In recent years, our life style become more better.
Description: The fragment style become more is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace 'become more better' with 'becomes much better'

First of all, people do their job more easier...
Suggestion: First of all, people do their job much easier

Sentence: They recorded everything in especial book, used their mind to calculated.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and calculated

Sentence: Finally, Space that we need for save all information are decrease.
Description: The token for is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to for and save

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