Topic about Euthanasia, do you support or not
In the 21th century, there are still several fatal illness in our world. Medical science can't find a cure for some of them. Millions of people are still struggle in order to prevent their illness. During this time these people suffer a lot. Their illness become intolerable. Because of their pain, some of them want to die immediately. For some of them, Euthanasia can be the sole solution of their pain. I would definitely agree that, the lives of fatally ill people should be ended. I have many good reasons in order to support my idea but two of them are the most important ones: to end suffering and to reduce financial burden of patient's family.
Mercy killing can be supported in order to end suffering of patient's. İn our world, millions of patient try to struggle with their illness. During this process they suffer a lot. Especially cancer patients try to struggle with their burden. Cancer create a huge damage on their physical, mental and psychological health. These patients loose their power. They can't live a quality life. many of them wait their death on the bed.
Euthanasia can be chosen from patients in order to reduce financial burden. Some species of illness as cancer can be a burden for patient's family. Drugs, hospital fees can't affordable for several people. If there is a lack of social policy in a state, health issue can create a problem for several families.
On the other hand, there are several people who are against the idea of euthanasia. They support that mercy killing is an idea which challenge with religion. They also defend that this decision may prevent new medical discoveries. I completely disagree with their ideas. According to me, mercy killing should be a patient's personal freedom of choice. Nobody can't feel the same feelings as a patient.
For conclusion, the lives of fatally people should be ended. In order to end suffer of patient's and in order to reduce financial burden of patient's families, mercy killing should be law.
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