These days a lot of young people are turning into the streets of the crime what are the reasons for this and how can it be tackled?
Over the years, the rate of offence among youth is rising day by day. Whilst some young generation is exposed to this problematic situation due to range of causes, it still can be solved with the help of a set of solutions.
The most prominent trigger for this problematic case is in terms of difficult family relationships. Once children were subjected from arguments of parents, which compels them to wander around the streets. The sensible policy can be adopted in terms of carefulness by parents which opens a way to children living on their life peacefully.
Another trigger can be in the form of drug and alcohol misuse. That is to say, teenagers are drinking alcohol which is forbiddened by the law and consuming drugs in illegal ways. To tackle this issue, parents must control their children seriously and make them away from crime.
Truanting from school might be marked as the important trigger for this issue. Most youngsters are absentees from lessons without any permission which gives a rise to them doing illegal attempts. The reasonable approach could be accepted a sense of attention by the teachers and parents which would make it an easier job.
To sum up, where as this problematic state might came into play owing to an array of causes such as family problems, attaching drugs and alcohol and truanting from school, this still could be addressed with the help of a range of policies like carefulness, controlling and a sense of attention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, such as, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93951612903 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63439180102 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576612903226 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.056665327 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.083333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194172629132 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697933796424 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443795182373 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106487991256 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274508489018 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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