In many parts of the world, children are now given more freedom than they used to have. Is this a positive or negative development?
In this day and age, juveniles in someplace in the world tend to have more freedom than before. In my opinion, I believe that this development would be more disadvantage than an advantage for both individuals and society.
There are various reasons why children have more freedom nowadays. One of the reasons is the habitat environment. They are living in a world where children have the right to do whatever they want and are protected by the policy’s government. In addition, parents are also the reason that children have freer now. By dint of a busy work schedule, parents often concentrate on their jobs more than their children. As a result, they do not have time to monitor their juveniles which leads to children having more freedom.
For the reasons mentioned above, I believe that it causes many adverse impacts on this development. The increase in the high rates of juvenile delinquency will pose a serious threat to society. When children do not have enough acknowledges of the surrounded world, children can be enticed easily into bad things in society such as crime, violence, and drugs. As a result of the fact that the percentage of committing crimes at a young age will be increased and if it is lingering for the after time, the society will be in an insecure status and lost a generation. Moreover, juveniles can lose their lives when they commit the crime.
In conclusion, I believe that children who have more freedom can easily do the wrong things, and this development will have a bad effect on society in some specific ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84269662921 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66414580171 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535580524345 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3552011803 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3571428571 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352549056183 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12876177416 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091259777308 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228408355347 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834854960693 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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