The picture below shows the plant of museum in 1998 and after some changes was made in 2008.
The given figure illustrates the improvement of the museum over 10-year period.
From an overall perspective, there has been a dramatical change after the amelioration. It is conspicuous from the picture that there exists a range entertaining area and building expansion for more function.
According to data recorded in the map in 2008, there were merely the advent of the garden in the center of the museum. Above this was an area serving for cafe surrounded by an empty land. Moving to the below area of the garden, the ticket entrance and exist located at the main gate and between the shop and temporary exhibition room. At the corner to the right of the museum were the WC, shop for bags and coats and outside was the permanent exhibition rooms.
Taking a look at the museum after its development, all of the area to the right of the garden was clear and empty. However, there were the reconstruction to the left of its. To be precise, the new existence of restaurant on the top to the left and the temporary exhibition room was expanded. Moreover, the acreage of all services in here was enlarged and decorated by one side to make this appearance become neat. Furthermore, the addition of cafe sitting area and fountains make the garden spot on in this place. Finally, there was no change in the permanent exhibition rooms over 10-year period.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ok at the museum after its development, all of the area to the right of the garden was cle...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, look, moreover
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 32.9175257732 21% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78723404255 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66229988016 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523404255319 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7833213624 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.5384615385 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176305758067 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593341921507 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389432724405 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969531156132 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273710966635 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ok at the museum after its development, all of the area to the right of the garden was cle...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, look, moreover
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 32.9175257732 21% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78723404255 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66229988016 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523404255319 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7833213624 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.5384615385 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176305758067 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593341921507 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389432724405 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969531156132 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273710966635 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.