The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?
Smoking is known as the determining factors leads to many abominable effect to society such as diseases, notorious habits,... However, there are more and more people have a vocation to consume this addictive component. Both reasons and effective methods to reduce this trend will be scrutinized in the following essay before my rational conclusion is reached.
To be clear, the main reason lead to this problem come from the individual awareness. Firstly, facing with daily pressure make people gradually become stressful and find to this component as the things to unwind. Secondly, when the parents and friends surrounding the youngsters consume cigarette make them curious about the effect and crave for trying this. Thirdly, the money to have one tobacco is quite reasonable which is the reason every status in the communication can purchase for it. Due to the tremendous tax come from cigarette contribution, the government and authority system neglect to its problem and impose a slacken policy to mitigate this alarming issue.
To tackle this thorny issue, we need to cooperation of every individual in the society. Obviously, the parents and adults should be the role model to drive the teenagers are conscious about the far-reaching influence of addictive components to their future. Moreover, educational systems and social organization can ease this heinous habit by leading a campaign and open some pragmatic which the guest is the victim of this trends. Furthermore, the government and authority system need to impose a strict discipline to reduce it. Taking for an instance, Singaporean government pose a highly tax to the cigarette and high fine to the people whose smoking behavior affect the non-smokers.
In conclusion, there are a range of reasons lead to this polarizing issue and we can repel it by the offered solution above. I personally believe that the most efficient and effective method to ease this issue is stem from our perception combined with the government' and society' efforts .
- In the past sporting champions used to be motivated primarily by the desire to win a match or to break world records These days they are more likely to be motivated by prize money and the opportunity to be famous What message does this send to young peopl 78
- In their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way Why is this Do you think it is a positive or negative development 73
- The dangers of smoking are well known yet many people continue with this habit What are the causes of this How can we reduce smoking in society 78
- The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age 73
- Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , .
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...ystem neglect to its problem and impose a slacken policy to mitigate this alarming issue....
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...gmatic which the guest is the victim of this trends. Furthermore, the government and...
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Message: You used an adverb ('highly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('tax') instead of another adjective.
...n instance, Singaporean government pose a highly tax to the cigarette and high fine to the p...
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Suggestion: .
... with the government and society efforts .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27329192547 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.816027321 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577639751553 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7949490808 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.2 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270489485397 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845796681824 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463473862117 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165779933919 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303902218273 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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